很多同學都想知道申請GRE獎學金的流程是什么樣的，原本美嘉導師想給同學們介紹一下流程，可是后來發(fā)現(xiàn)重要的是要寫出完美的GRE獎學金申請書，所以小編就給同學們找來了GRE獎學金申請的范文，好的GRE獎學金申請文章在申請獎學金過程中所起的作用遠超過托福和GRE。下面就是導師為大家準備的范文：

Growing up in a modest village in China，I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology;people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking water and use ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisions and personal computers。 But when my father gave me an old radio to play with，I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraption and see what inside made such interesting sounds。Sitting on the floor with a confused grin，surrounded by wires and metal，　I looked up at my father and asked where the noises were。。。(有刪節(jié))

美嘉導師表示,合理地闡述了申請者學習電子工程的動機，學習動機是評審委員非?？粗械?。同時，GRE獎學金評審委員讀了這段文字，會使他們沉浸在對童年往事的美好回憶里，借此打動他們的心。

另外一篇修改過的文章開頭用詩一般的語言寫道(有刪節(jié))：

I first read this paragraph from Madame Curie as a 14-year-old child，　and I still remember how wonderful I felt。 I remember thinking，"What esteemed men they were!How hard they worked!" As I grew older，this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity。I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart，kindling a love of science，and encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world。

結尾呼應了開頭，闡述了作者為什么要去美國讀書：

I never forgot my adolescent idol，Maria Curie。As I re-read the book，another passage leaped out："She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries。。Maria took the train from Warsaw to Paris，the intellectual Mecca。"

For me，the intellectual Mecca is the United States。。。。 I hope to continue my study and research，as detailed below。One day，I hope to find the pure esthetics of biology and reach its luminous summits。

美嘉導師提示：給同學們準備的GRE獎學金申請范文，同學們覺得怎么樣？是不是對你有點啟發(fā)呢，不是每個人都得當科學家才有辦法得獎學金，同學們要學習的是寫作的技巧，怎么才能準確的找到評審委員的軟肋，只要找到，你就成功了，同學們加油！